I am a Year 7 student in the Uru Mānuka Cluster. This is a place where I will share my learning. Please note that some of it will not be complete, it will be my first drafts. Remember to be positive, thoughtful and helpful when you leave me a comment.
Kia Ora Wiari Lacie and Trinity here, We like your blog post about SunSmart. We think you did a really good blog post. Maybe next time you could add what biteable is?
Good job wiari nice video. i like that you mentioned wear sunscreen because mostly everyone just says wear a hat. next time i think you should make the video more longer.
Hi Wiari, Your video is better than ours! I really like the part when you ask are you ready to be sunsmart I know I am! Next time maybe you could not say how to be sunsmart on hot days, instead you could say how to be sunsmart outside!
wow you blown me away with you goo work and good jod for be sun smart and have a good day and kepp with your good work and l like that you us biteable in your work thanks for do work good bye have a good day seen you soon
I like your biteable my favorite part was when there was a safe with lazers it was awesome maybe focus on some more information because there is not that much information but other that its awesome blog yah Wiari #AWESOME ~CHRISTINA.
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Kia Ora Wiari Lacie and Trinity here,
ReplyDeleteWe like your blog post about SunSmart. We think you did a really good blog post. Maybe next time you could add what biteable is?
Blog you later.
Good job wiari nice video. i like that you mentioned wear sunscreen because mostly everyone just says wear a hat. next time i think you should make the video more longer.
ReplyDeleteHi Wiari I like your blog post about sun smart I really good blog post. maybe next time you could add mur wrst.
ReplyDeleteHI WIARI I love love love love that it is so so so so so so so cool i like yours than mine bye bye😁
ReplyDeletethat was cool wiari you should do another one.
ReplyDeleteWOW you have blown me away. you can do good videos I can not do it that. you are the best I guess but I mean it you are the best ok bye bye
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ReplyDeleteAwesome Wiari I like it
ReplyDeleteI like your biteable I haven't done mine and yours is good Can you make it interesting if you know what I mean. Bye!.
Hi Wiari,
ReplyDeleteYour video is better than ours!
I really like the part when you ask are you ready to be sunsmart I know I am!
Next time maybe you could not say how to be sunsmart on hot days, instead you could say how to be sunsmart outside!
wow you blown me away with you goo work and good jod for be sun smart and have a good day and kepp with your good work and l like that you us biteable in your work thanks for do work good bye have a good day seen you soon
ReplyDeleteHi Wiari Well Done i think its great! i loved it good job now i know what to do in the sun! Bye.
ReplyDeleteHi Wiari Well Done i think its great! i loved it good job now i know what to do in the sun! Bye.
ReplyDeleteKia wiari, Christina here!
ReplyDeleteI like your biteable my favorite part was when there was a safe with lazers it was awesome maybe focus on some more information because there is not that much information but other that its awesome blog yah Wiari #AWESOME ~CHRISTINA.
I like the it it is so coll
ReplyDeleteand my favourite part was the end bye bye.