I am a Year 7 student in the Uru Mānuka Cluster. This is a place where I will share my learning. Please note that some of it will not be complete, it will be my first drafts. Remember to be positive, thoughtful and helpful when you leave me a comment.
My name is Mikey. I'm a part of the Summer Learning Journey team and I'll be commenting on some of your blog posts over the summer break. Congratulations on completing your first activity! :)
You've made a really great attempt here, Wiari. I like that you've used pictures to show which foods you'd take on your ocean voyage. If you to jump back onto the Summer Learning Journey website and re-read the activity, I think you'll find that this task asks for 10 different food items. Would you be able to add six more to your list?
Please structure your comments as follows: Positive - Something done well Thoughtful - A sentence to let us know you actually read/watched or listened to what they had to say Helpful - Give some ideas for next time or Ask a question you want to know more about
Kia ora Wiari!
ReplyDeleteMy name is Mikey. I'm a part of the Summer Learning Journey team and I'll be commenting on some of your blog posts over the summer break. Congratulations on completing your first activity! :)
You've made a really great attempt here, Wiari. I like that you've used pictures to show which foods you'd take on your ocean voyage. If you to jump back onto the Summer Learning Journey website and re-read the activity, I think you'll find that this task asks for 10 different food items. Would you be able to add six more to your list?
Thanks Wiari. Have a wonderful day.
Mikey :)