I am a Year 7 student in the Uru Mānuka Cluster. This is a place where I will share my learning. Please note that some of it will not be complete, it will be my first drafts. Remember to be positive, thoughtful and helpful when you leave me a comment.
Hi it's Nuu from Hornby Primary school. I like your drawing of the kiwi. The brown tummy pattern is a cool. Did you think about rereading your writing? Sometimes it helps to reread your writing to make sure it makes sense. Maybe you could add a little bit more detail about your kiwi that you have made too.
Hi Angus Here from hornby primary school. I like how you created a kiwi and said that it is the best you've created.You did a good job. Maybe you could tell us why you did this drawing? What was the point of making the kiwi?
Hi Wiari it Olivia H here. I really like you kiwi it is cool and unique. but maybe next time you could add a little bit more writing to it so people will now how long it took you and what app you did it ok. what app did you do it on.
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Hi it's Nuu from Hornby Primary school. I like your drawing of the kiwi. The brown tummy pattern is a cool. Did you think about rereading your writing? Sometimes it helps to reread your writing to make sure it makes sense. Maybe you could add a little bit more detail about your kiwi that you have made too.
ReplyDeleteHi Angus Here from hornby primary school. I like how you created a kiwi and said that it is the best you've created.You did a good job. Maybe you could tell us why you did this drawing? What was the point of making the kiwi?
ReplyDeletehi it,s lorelei your kiwi is soooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo cool it has really long legs it is so cool see ya
ReplyDeleteHi Wiari it Olivia H here.
ReplyDeleteI really like you kiwi it is cool and unique.
but maybe next time you could add a little bit more writing to it so people will now how long it took you and what app you did it ok.
what app did you do it on.