I am a Year 7 student in the Uru Mānuka Cluster. This is a place where I will share my learning. Please note that some of it will not be complete, it will be my first drafts. Remember to be positive, thoughtful and helpful when you leave me a comment.
HELLO BLOGERS SO MY LITERACY TEACHER TOLD AS TO PICK A SPORT FOR THOSE PEOPLE THAT DONT DO WINTER SPORTS. THE TEACHER SAID TO DO A SLIDE ABOUT THE SPORTTHAT WE ARE FOCUSING ON.
Hello Wiari it is Ema-leigh here I just came past this I really like this because if, people from this school or others want to, know some more about Hockey they can just see this. you brought me back to when my Dad was watching it and i had to watch it I didn't understand what they, were doing but now i Know a little bit about it. Next time you could add more exciting stuff so the reader will like it even more then me and others.
Hi Wawa, it's Daisy & Aria. I now know that you love hockey because you said it on every slide!!! Next time use a more readable font. Why did you put hockey and then no stick. Bye Wawaaaaaaaaaa!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
ia ora, I’m olivia for the blue room Wow you knocked my socks off…. and you like hockey and l play hockey for Hornby team and it cool and your a player and i m to You taught me Did you know…to and it is cool and your goods at the time Great! I like how you...it really helps you story If you could good bye wawa
Hi Wawa, it's Ashaswi & Trisanah. We now know that you love hockey because you said it on a slide well infact YOU WROTE IN EVERY SINGle SLIDE!!! Next time use a more readable font. Why did you put hockey and then no stick. Bye Wawaaaaaaaaaa!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Hi Wiari I like what you've done and the font coloured white and the background you've done coloured black (did you even know that my sister and me's favourite colour is white and black) but this is kind of oposite because (my nightmare was a drawing COVERED IN BLACK!!!) well just forget about that but I like itm
Kia Ora Wiari, This is a great blog post! But next time you could put your introduction first and then put your DLO. You could also add more pictures to make it a bit more interesting! But this is amazing!
Hi Wawa, it's Ashaswi & Trisanah. I already know you like hokey.Well infact YOU WROTE IN EVERY SINGle SLIDE!!! Why did you put hockey and then no stick. Bye Wawaaaaaaaaaa!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Kia Ora Wiari, It's Amy here, I enjoyed the part where you said that you need to have your hockey stick at your hip. When I read your post I learnt that it was actually your hip not your belly-button. Next time, you could check your spelling and punctuation.
Please structure your comments as follows: Positive - Something done well Thoughtful - A sentence to let us know you actually read/watched or listened to what they had to say Helpful - Give some ideas for next time or Ask a question you want to know more about
Hi Wiari hockzy is the best Wiari its fun to play Wiari.
ReplyDeleteThank-you Kaizah-rae, what was your best part out of my seven rules.
DeleteHello Wiari it is Ema-leigh here I just came past this I really like this because if, people from this school or others want to, know some more about Hockey they can just see this. you brought me back to when my Dad was watching it and i had to watch it I didn't understand what they, were doing but now i Know a little bit about it. Next time you could add more exciting stuff so the reader will like it even more then me and others.
ReplyDeleteHello Ema-leigh if you want to now how to play you could play hockey for winter sports
Deletei can next year
DeleteKia ora wiari i like how you out information about how to play hokcey i love it wiari keep on the good work. #AWESOME ~CHRISTINA
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DeleteThank-you Christina you are to sweet to say that thank-you is there other thing that you like???
DeleteHi Wawa, it's Daisy & Aria.
ReplyDeleteI now know that you love hockey because you said it on every slide!!!
Next time use a more readable font.
Why did you put hockey and then no stick.
Bye Wawaaaaaaaaaa!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Hi Daisy please make sure you don't have the same comment as Ashaswi please
Deleteia ora, I’m olivia for the blue room
ReplyDeleteWow you knocked my socks off…. and you like hockey and l play hockey for Hornby team and it cool and your a player and i m to You taught me
Did you know…to and it is cool and your goods at the time Great! I like how you...it really helps you story
If you could good bye wawa
THANK-YOU Olivia your really sweet to say that thank-you. I never new that you played hockey
DeleteHi Wawa,
ReplyDeleteit's Ashaswi & Trisanah.
We now know that you love hockey because you said it on a slide well infact YOU WROTE IN EVERY SINGle SLIDE!!!
Next time use a more readable font.
Why did you put hockey and then no stick.
Bye Wawaaaaaaaaaa!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Hi Ashaswi make sure you don't have the same comment as Daisy please.
Deletehi sup
ReplyDeleteThomas you need PTH comment then just hi sup
DeleteHi Wiari I like what you've done and the font coloured white and the background you've done coloured black (did you even know that my sister and me's favourite colour is white and black) but this is kind of oposite because (my nightmare was a drawing COVERED IN BLACK!!!) well just forget about that but I like itm
ReplyDeleteKia Ora Wiari,
ReplyDeleteThis is a great blog post! But next time you could put your introduction first and then put your DLO. You could also add more pictures to make it a bit more interesting! But this is amazing!
Hi Wiari hockzy I like hockzy Wiari next time pit mura fas ples.
ReplyDeleteTalofa Wiari I'm Basty, It's a cool blog everyone likes to play hckey. Bye
ReplyDeleteTuffo Wiari Your Hockey Slide Teach me how to play Hockey
ReplyDeleteThank-you Orlando what else dose it teach you
DeleteHello Wiari how to hit the ball
DeleteHi Wawa,
ReplyDeleteit's Ashaswi & Trisanah.
I already know you like hokey.Well infact YOU WROTE IN EVERY SINGle SLIDE!!!
Why did you put hockey and then no stick.
Bye Wawaaaaaaaaaa!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Kia Ora Wiari, It's Amy here,
ReplyDeleteI enjoyed the part where you said that you need to have your hockey stick at your hip.
When I read your post I learnt that it was actually your hip not your belly-button.
Next time, you could check your spelling and punctuation.